Youngsters nowadays are involved in many crimes. What are the causes of this problem? In your opinion, how can we reduce youth crime rates?
In the meantime, criminal behavior has been increased among youth. Youth crime is primarily the outcome of multiple conditions such as; poverty and family violence. In my opinion, early discipline to younger children is the first way to minimize adolescents crimes, then comes the role of the government.
First and foremost, I am of the belief that harsh parenting styles is the main cause of young offenses. Fathers and mothers, who are strict and use violent, create aggression in their dependents. In other words, youngsters will never assault people unless their parents have not treated them violently. For example, spanking and yelling at a child will teach them that this is the only mean to take their rights and others rights as well. Thus, married couples should attend classes on how to rear toddlers and juniors in order to become productive and fruitful future generations.
Secondly, crimes of teenagers are attributed to financial problems. Countries that suffer from poverty do not have good education system. Although criminals are not necessary be uneducated individuals , however, most of the crimes are committed due to lack of education. Moreover,unemployment issues leads to a rise in the crime rates. Unemployed youth need to run their households and when the do not get enough income, they may get involved in criminal activities to provide their families. To illustrate, according to a research paper, theft and murder in the Caribbean are common among young men whose ages are around the twenties. Here therefore, comes the role of stakeholders to offer job opportunities for the graduates in order to reduce crime within the country.
In conclusion, there are many reasons for committing crimes amongst the youth and family is the one who can set the foundation in their children to become better men in the future. In addition, if the authorities solved unemployment and poverty issues, violent rates would be reduced.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22929936306 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8571252204 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636942675159 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.05714717 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5882352941 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172782539667 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426703556226 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290791970862 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094485294635 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025167552497 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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