you were on a pleasant trip and had rented a flat from your friend who was on a holiday. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter writ him:
>how you felt about the trip and
>how did you take care of his house in his absence.
Dear Sam,
Hope you are doing good. Firstly, I want to thank you for the favour of letting me stay at your house in your absence. It was a life changing experience for me as I have done the house chores by myself. I learnt to cook, doing laundry and all other essential daily tasks.
I must say that your locality is pretty good and neighbours are very helpful and supportive as one day I was not well and they arranged a doctor for me. Also, the prescribed medicines and food too. they took good care of me and only because of them I was able to attend the meeting which was one of the main reason for this trip.
I explored the local market and got some indoor plants like aloe vera and snake plant. Both the plants help to purify the indoor environment. I have already paid this month's electricity and water bill. I used to mop and clean the house once every two days. Though, you were missed otherwise we could have explored a few new places and would have enjoyed my trip more.
I hope you will like the changes and hoping to see you soon.
Regards,
Nisha
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| 2019-05-17 | Neenu martin | 73 | view |
| 2019-01-20 | nishabhan | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, Hope you are doing good. Firstly, I want...
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Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ry and all other essential daily tasks. I must say that your locality is pretty ...
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Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... the prescribed medicines and food too. they took good care of me and only because o...
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Line 6, column 168, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'months'' or 'month's'?
Suggestion: months'; month's
...r environment. I have already paid this months electricity and water bill. I used to m...
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Line 6, column 369, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es and would have enjoyed my trip more. I hope you will like the changes and hop...
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Line 8, column 62, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the changes and hoping to see you soon. Regards, Nisha
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Line 10, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd hoping to see you soon. Regards, Nisha
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33663366337 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10553813878 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653465346535 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6470796239 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.3846153846 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5384615385 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181985717415 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520364604451 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621006842536 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109816876897 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428475260281 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.57 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.