The graph below shows the number of library books read by boys and girls at Starmouth School from 2006 to the present Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The graph below shows the number of library books read by boys and girls at Starmouth School from 2006 to the present.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph demonstrates about library of Starmouth School. It shows the trends of the numbers of students who read in that library differed by gender between 2009 and 2012.

Based on the graph, between 2009 and 2010, there was a slight increase in book numbers read by males. It rose from 50 to 80. Numbers then rose steadily to 100 in 2011. Whereas, there was a surprised sharp fall to 80, in 2012.

There were different trends between males and females. Numbers of book read by female students increased steadily from 2009 to 2010, and then rose sharply to 140 books in the present. It is the pe...

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