Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?
There has been a significant increase in the popularity of young people waiting until they get older to have babies. In this essay, I will outline the main reason for this tendency and its impacts on society and family lives.
On the one hand, the main reason leading to this trend is that youngsters want to spend as much time as possible on enjoying their young ages instead of having responsibility with their children. In fact, this choice allows young people to have not only more free time to broaden their horizons but also more opportunities to pursue better career prospects and raise their salaries. For instance, most of young couples may feel easier to travel when they do not need to nurture a child. As a result, being pregnant late can help parents to guarantee good lives for their children due to their useful experiences gaining in the younger period as well as high incomes.
On the other hand, this tendency may bring some negative influences on society in general and family lives in particular. Firstly, having children late can create a considerable gap between two generations. Consequently, parents can find more difficulties in starting a conversation or discussing with their offspring. Moreover, babies being born with poor physical health are often associated with their parents’ late reproduction. This may be harmful to the quality of future workforce in terms of working efficiency.
In conclusion, there are many benefits explaining the reason why people like having children later in their life. However, this phenomenon may pose many threats to both society and family lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 398, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the young') or simply say ''most young''.
Suggestion: most of the young; most young
...and raise their salaries. For instance, most of young couples may feel easier to travel when ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in general, in particular, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13962264151 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71752091074 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607547169811 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1844912636 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.769230769 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3076923077 7.06120827912 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262881469019 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890208766275 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795695390826 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164769041391 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645965684679 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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