Increase in world population is a greatest threat to humanity at present.
What are the causes of this continued rise?
Do u agree that it ia the greatest threat to humanity?
Population increasing at an exhilarating pace is known to be the biggest issue that has been encountered by humanity. Improved medical facilities have contributed largely to make this world more populated. This essay will argue that why it is entirely appropriate to consider it as a huge problem.
Unstoppable increment in population's size has numerous number of reasons. Most importantly, advancements in medical area is keeping the elderly alive. In addition to that, people have become wary of their physical health. Proper diet plans are being followed along with regular exercise to avoid any detrimental affect on their healthy bodies. Recent report by world heath organization revealed that population of india was increased by 33% in the last decade. Therefore, it is evident that world's population is on rise continually.
This colossal increase is a serious concern to humanity. Hospitals are overburdened as more and more people tend to fall ill in their old age. So, majority of the beds and surgery rooms are acquired by them, pressurizing a handful of doctors available. Another issue is regarding the ecosystem, as the number of human beings is everlasting, the demand for food and lands imposing a great threat on the nature. For instance, deforestation in southern part of india to make a living for people is disturbing the ecological balance. Thus, this continued upsurge observed in population levels is trying to exacerbate the already existing worse situation.
In conclusion, the population increase has turned out to be a serious debate which needs to be addressed. This essay argued that although, people can't be deprived of the medical benefits which directly impacts the people's percentage, it is highly unlikely to ignore the problems this continuation is bringing alongside.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-01-21 | Karanbir judge | 92 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 313, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...gular exercise to avoid any detrimental affect on their healthy bodies. Recent report by ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 492, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...t decade. Therefore, it is evident that worlds population is on rise continually. T...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 147, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...This essay argued that although, people cant be deprived of the medical benefits whi...
^^^^
Line 7, column 215, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...cal benefits which directly impacts the peoples percentage, it is highly unlikely to ig...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, regarding, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34265734266 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96373173629 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622377622378 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6140442357 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8823529412 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181556867777 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522793873439 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463005494373 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10138281547 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153303301721 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.