A friend, who lives in another country, has invited to you come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: –
thank him/her for the invitation
explain why you cannot come
ask for his suggestion when you can come
Dear Mathew,
Hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. I would like to thank you for sending an invite for spending summer holidays with you in Australia.
I was really excited and looking forward to this vacation as it would be my first overseas trip. For me, it would have been a great opportunity to explore a diverse culture but unfortunately due to work exigencies lately I will have to cancel my visit. To elucidate my reporting manager has recently resigned and company cannot find a suitable replacement in such a short frame of time so they have passed some additional work responsibilities on me. Thus I would be occupied most of the times for the next quarter.
I believe I would be free towards the year-end as the work pressure at the point of time is less and additionally, by that time company might have sorted out the replacement issue. Would December be a suitable time to visit Australia ?. Please suggest so that I can pre-book my flight tickets and also prepare any itinerary.
I look forward to your suggestion and Give my love to Jane and Mary.
Warm wishes
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mathew, Hope this letter finds you in the pink o...
^^^
Line 2, column 97, Rule ID: AN_INVITE[1]
Message: Use only in informal register. In other registers, 'invitation' should be used.
Suggestion: invitation
... would like to thank you for sending an invite for spending summer holidays with you i...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 156, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... summer holidays with you in Australia. I was really excited and looking forward...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 452, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...additional work responsibilities on me. Thus I would be occupied most of the times f...
^^^^
Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e my love to Jane and Mary. Warm wishes Ben
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, really, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69897959184 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6683807095 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647959183673 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2572115165 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7272727273 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131755036929 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553088762264 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848738961274 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111180445522 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135539075323 0.0580467560999 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.