An English speaking friend is coming to spend a week in your hometown. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
. offer to find a place to stay
. give suggestions abut what to do in a week.
. inform about the clothes to be brought.
Dear Sam,
Hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. I was so excited after hearing the news that you are visiting my hometown. Since I am native to this place so I can provide valuable suggestions in making your stay comfortable.
As you are aware that Sydney is a bustling city so there are a plethora of options for accommodation depending on your budget. I know a lot of places which offers short term rentals and the type of stay varies from shared rooms to homestay thus, I can help you to find a suitable place and book it in advance before your arrival.
There are myriads of tourist spots which we can explore in a week's time. On the weekdays, we can travel to the city museum and the art galleries and on the weekends, we can go to the zoo and the national park as they are located at the suburbs of the city. I am sure you will find this as an alluring experience.
Since Sydney is temperate and sunny all around the year so I would advise you to bring along only summer clothing.
Looking forward to your rapid response.
Cheers,
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, Hope this letter finds you in the pink o...
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Line 4, column 253, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help you find' instead.
Suggestion: help you find
...om shared rooms to homestay thus, I can help you to find a suitable place and book it in advance...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 331, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...book it in advance before your arrival. There are myriads of tourist spots which...
^^^
Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou to bring along only summer clothing. Looking forward to your rapid response. ...
^^^^^
Line 10, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orward to your rapid response. Cheers, Ben
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.375 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35048399271 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.4138449747 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189770107726 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709285846809 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606916150982 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100597957146 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692571979785 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.