The past century has given us a lot of inventions that changed the course of human history. Advancements in the medical field, transportation and technology reached us in new heights. Antibiotics, aeroplane and computers are the given examples to analyze the previous statement.
Antibiotics are a boon in the medical industry. They helped us to bring down the mortality rate a lot. Medicines with antibiotics in it are used to cure lots of diseases which were fatal in the past. It is an evolving industry and newer and improved antibiotics are discovered every now and then.
Aeroplane satisfied man's long last dream of flying. It reduced the time delay in reaching places by a significant amount. Aeroplanes are used in both human and cargo transport. In today's world, air traffic with aeroplanes is something that one cannot avoid.
Computers revolutionized the world. Ever since its inception, computers helped us in solving complex problems. Every other industry uses computer technology to function.
For example in the medical industry, they are used to predict disease outbreaks. In aviation, they are used as automatic pilots.
In summary, we can say that although it is difficult to pinpoint a single invention as the greatest invention of the past 100 years, computers helped the other technology fields achieving newer heights. Therefore computers are the greatest inventions of the past 100 years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...and improved antibiotics are discovered every now and then. Aeroplane satisfied mans long last ...
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Line 8, column 47, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to predicting'.
Suggestion: used to predicting
...ample in the medical industry, they are used to predict disease outbreaks. In aviation, they ar...
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Line 10, column 204, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...hnology fields achieving newer heights. Therefore computers are the greatest inventions o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, therefore, for example, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31415929204 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91281206345 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575221238938 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.5024630542 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6109377704 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.7222222222 104.977214359 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5555555556 20.9669160288 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.25397266985 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 2.91625615764 309% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157877911655 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468101931266 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934357834884 0.071462118173 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761324476035 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106817005097 0.0609392437508 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 10.9458128079 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.63 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.3980295567 65% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 64.5 Out of 90
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