Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In this era of globalization, many countries promote co-education. To elucidate getting educated in mixed schools or separate schools is a highly contentious topic. I will discuss both sides of the argument and elucidate my opinion in the below paragraphs.
Firstly there is a myriad of advantages associated with getting educated from mixed schools the most preponderant one being that it instills a level of confidence in young adolescents and aid them in interaction with the opposite gender. Thus this behaviour will be helpful for them in their personal as well as professional life. For instance, if a girl gets a job in a company then she won’t be hesitant in interacting with her peers additionally this may be one of the reasons which will result in a successful career.
Similarly, on the hand, single-sex schools allure children to avoid teenage fantasies and concentrate on their studies. This results in better performance and grades. Apparently, separate schools also help in the reduction of sexual offences which happen repeatedly in schools. In a recent survey done by the New York Times, the number of sexual offences and abuses will be reduced to less than 10 per cent in many countries which promoted single-sex education system. There are countries like Saudi Arabia which already have an implemented separate education system for boys and girls which on one hand promotes gender inequality and on the other reduces sexual offences.
To conclude in my opinion co-education has far more positives than negatives thus mixed schools should be promoted as they enable children to gain a level of confidence which is beneficial for their future prospects additionally on a broader level it helps in curbing gender inequality in our modern society.
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, firstly, if, may, similarly, so, still, then, thus, well, for instance, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22377622378 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92401363517 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587412587413 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.7615044436 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127729962012 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475228891772 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371525601377 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767137050767 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245210593306 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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