Some people think that online games should be banned. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion and revelant examples.
The 21st century has witnessed plentiful new breakthroughs in computer technology. By the same token, online games are becoming more popular with adolescents today. However, some people opine that video games are detrimental and they should be banned. Personally, I totally strike a blow for this notion for 2 reasons.
To commence with, playing online games has bad effects on people's health. Obviously, spending too much time on games can lead to common illnesses such as backache, obesity and so on. Besides, a great contribution to the abnormal mental development as well as the lack of soft skills is also made by wasting time on electronic games. More seriously, some youngsters are so passionate about electronic games that they forget to eat, sleep and drink, which results in teenagers' collapsing, dying on the keyboard.
In addition, online game is one of the most vital factors increasing the number of offenders. The root of felonies and robberies in the young is mostly derived from game addiction. For instance, on August 13th, Trinh Van Duy - a high school student living in Hoa Binh murdered his grandmother to get 200,000 VND to spend on his playing games. This incident is one of many pitiful situations, the main cause of which results from the obsession with games.
To sum up, I believe that online games are really bad for youngsters so they are should be prohibited, otherwise, other bad things will happen and people are not capable of controlling them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, really, so, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, to sum up, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 246.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0487804878 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70312581052 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 106.607317073 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646341463415 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 283.868780488 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3591861331 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5384615385 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 5.23603664747 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175586018555 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644659389419 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773024495353 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111333213196 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477787377873 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 40.7170731707 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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