Writing task 1 (a letter)
You have recently flown to another country on a business trip. You were satisfied with the flight, but didn’t like services at the airport. Write a letter to the airport manager and say
– Give your flight details.
– Why were you disappointed?
– Suggest some improvements to the airport services.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a frequent traveller of Jet airways and platinum member of Jet privilege . I prefer this airline as it is always on time and courteous service offered by the staff. However, I would like to express my dissatisfaction which I faced during my recent trip.
Recently, I booked 9W 6 flight for my business trip. It was the cheapest flight and was reaching the destination within the stipulated time.
Let me explain in more detail. After security check, I went to check in counter to show my soft copy of boarding pass and to collect hard copy. In todays world , most of the documents I carry is in soft copies. But staff insisted me to bring hard copy of boarding pass and airline ticket and without hard copy they have not allowed me to the check in counter.
Somehow, I managed to get printout of both the documents, but in meantime the queue of that counter were doubled and I have wasted another 15-20 minutes in that queue. I would suggest you a viable solution. It will be great if management briefs the team about rules and regulations.
Thankyou for your attention to this matter and I will be waiting flor your positive response.
Best regards,
Tim Frank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 78, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ays and platinum member of Jet privilege . I prefer this airline as it is always o...
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Line 4, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nd to collect hard copy. In todays world , most of the documents I carry is in sof...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60563380282 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54057394196 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647887323944 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8043685429 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0714285714 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2142857143 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.42857142857 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124170280666 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364034191148 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379033560262 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658516257486 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040590361407 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.