The line graph illustrate the amount of three kinds of spread( Butter, margarine and low fat and reduced spread) which was consumed over 26 years form 1981 to 2007. Units are measured in grams.
Overall, the consumption of butter and margarine decreased over the period of time.While, Low fat and reduced spread,it rose. At the start of the period, Butter was the most popular spread, which was replace by margarine from the year 1991 to 2000, and following that low fat and reduced spread become the most widely used spread in the final years.
With regards to the amount of butter used, it begains at around 140 grams in the first stage and peaked up to 160 grams in 1986 before falling dramatically at around 40 grams in the end of the period.However, 90 grams of margarine was used in the year 1981 after which the figure fluctuated slightly and dropped to a low of 40 grams in 2007.
On the other hand, low fat and reduced spread started using in 1996 which was about 10 grams. After eleven years the consumption of Low fat and reduced spread increased up to 20 grams in final years respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...butter and margarine decreased over the period of time.While, Low fat and reduced spread,it ro...
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Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...arine decreased over the period of time.While, Low fat and reduced spread,it rose. At...
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Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...f time.While, Low fat and reduced spread,it rose. At the start of the period, Butte...
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Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'replaced'.
Suggestion: replaced
... was the most popular spread, which was replace by margarine from the year 1991 to 2000...
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Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...round 40 grams in the end of the period.However, 90 grams of margarine was used in the ...
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Line 7, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 40 grams in 2007. On the other hand, low fat and reduced spread started using...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62944162437 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42483436359 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48730964467 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.6428299008 43.030603864 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 130.285714286 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1428571429 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112276647706 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619863976826 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049700305329 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839021735522 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470731440917 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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