Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge in the trend by the prodigies discussing the improvement in public transport system rather than expansion of roads. Some people believe that advancement and growth of public transport system is essential, while others maintain that roads should be expanded to accommodate the increase in the private cars. This essay will discuss that why expansion of public transport system is important.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments associated with the improvement of public transport system. Firstly, the most conspicuous is the emission of less harmful gases. Expansion and improvement of public transport network will tend more people to travel through these means and therefore reduce the emission of harmful gases through number of private vehicles. As a matter of fact, expansion of public transport network will boost a healthy environment.
On the other hand, proponents of the view for expansion of road network are not cognizant with the fact that this scenario will not only entail inundation of private cars but also pose a hazard for local population. As an example, more number of private cars on road near schools and hospitals can pose potential threat to children and local population. As a result, expansion of road networks will although accommodate more number of private vehicles yet will pose threat and be prone to more accidents.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propound the fact that advancement and growth of private transport instead of expansion of road will not only add towards a healthy environment but also make the local population less prone to accidents.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Parth3737
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, so, therefore, while, as a matter of fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29007633588 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77416595336 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492366412214 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5034686894 50.4703680194 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.25397266985 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0139971802938 0.242375264174 6% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00567657786342 0.0925447433944 6% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0179509153637 0.071462118173 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00762008527816 0.151781067708 5% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0131983748598 0.0609392437508 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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