The question of distribution of responsibilities referring to household work between men and women have become controversial point for majority of people. In particular, it has become apparent that nowadays more and more women is becoming busy with their job and do not have enough time for housework. As to my mind, I truly believe under such conditions family should share their house duties between spouses.
While there are a number of possible ways to justify my position, one of the main arguments is that, I believe, the main thing in this question is rational use of time. For example, if women is busy with her occupation full day and her husband stays at home it is logically that he will accomplish all domesticities because he will have a bunch of time for that.
A different yet principal aspect is that marriage never will be all right and happy providing that one of the family member always busy with their work, household tasks and there is no time to enjoy life.
On the other hand, historically women always stay at home, bring up children and cook all the time while men must work, hunt or earn money. In other words, carrying out all domestic chores was women’s responsibility wholly. I find this argument without merit for the following reason: hitherto women were not engaged in work and their only occupation was housework whereas now women can make discoveries and take managerial posts like men.
To conclude, I find such opinion that only women must fulfil all domestic chores very obscurant and old-fashioned view. I believe person who is less busy should be in charge of that or provided that both spouses loaded with their main work it would be appropriate to discuss and share duties.
- The chart below shows participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia. 11
- The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billion) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. 84
- Films and games can be accessed at any time from mobile devices, the smart phones, tablets and laptop computers. Do the advantages of such developments outweigh the disadvantades? 89
- The gap between the rich and the poor people is increasingly widespread, as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer. What problems could this situation cause? What are the solutions to address the problem. 84
- Every year several languages die out every year. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier when there are fewer languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, whereas, while, as to, for example, in particular, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86101694915 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6473382642 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586440677966 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.4174547107 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.363636364 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8181818182 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215657413785 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779795380403 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403516465474 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112442304965 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356185739595 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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