Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks. Which one do you prefer?
Trying different sort of activities is a part of human nature as they find it interesting. However, there are some people who love to do only those activities in which they are well, whereas other prefer to do wide range of new activities by putting their lives in danger. I prefer the former view.
To begin with, those people who used to do same thing again and again are more comfortable in their own activity area as they have more knowledge or experience about it. To be exemplified, many professionals such as doctors, engineers and teachers have knowledge about their own job , if they try other professions, they will not become successful.
Furthermore, trying new things sometimes put bad influence on personality development due to the lack of self-esteem to get success. Moreover, taking risks may prove perilous to one's life. For instance, some people find adventurous sports or games interesting, but their body or mind is not capable of doing it due to less body stamina , still they try it without considering thconsequences. Eventually, they harm themselves by injuries and wounds.
To conclude, a peron should try those activities in which he or she is comfortable. If one does something out of his comfort zone, the results are considered by him before doing it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, whereas, for instance, sort of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08837209302 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92026308074 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651162790698 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.457278416 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4545454545 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371853007697 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118741756543 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969885306468 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211696412944 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0973542035801 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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