In some countries, young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard for their study.
What do you think the causes and what solutions can you suggest?
Never before had there been a staggering number of overpopulation in certain countries. this social problem can be eventually cause an environmental catastrophe between the environment and humankind. In this sense, it is worth ascertaining other contributing factors to find the issue.
it can be asserted the chief cause why people leave their countires and move to another countries so it’s find jobs this fact sense that global migration consist of people moving from poor countries to wealthier countries. For exemplenation economical hardship and political conflict are there crucial factor that have led most migrants to leave their motherland and move to more stability countries with high salary. Consequently such as from the Middle East to Western Europe, Latin america to North america, and South-East Asia to Australia in this countries are most common of migrants.
Ultimately overpopulation leads to depletion of natural resources including limited amount of water and food what is vital to people’s lives. They are cutting down forests, hunting wildlife in a reckless manner, causing pollution and creating a host of problems. In addition all these can lead to degradation of environment with the overuse of coal, oil and natural gas, it has started producing some serious effects on our environment. rise in the number of vehicles and industries have badly affected the quality of air. rise in amount of CO2 emissions leads to global warming.
Viewed as a whole problems caused by overpopulation in urban areas are very serious. In this sense government need to solve this issue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39920948617 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96250794282 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648221343874 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3181807864 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.076923077 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120798151572 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353310906752 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307701510098 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0607545474234 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264017992084 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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