More and more people are opting for ready-made food instead of freshly cooked food. Do this development has more advantages over disadvantages?.
It is important to consider the type of nails that we consume. Over the years there has been an increase in the number of people who up for fast food instead of home cooked meals. I believe that the benefits of the strength outweighs the drawbacks.
On the one hand, a major disadvantage of fast food is the hell challenge that the consumption may lead to. Sure that fast food preservatives and other additives for increasing the shelf life of canned food have side effects. For example team would have been proven to come to cause cancer and are discouraged in most developed countries. Such food lead to obesity which often cause more critical health challenges. Conversely, food are more healthier and are less likely to lead to health problems.
However, the opinion that there are positives to ready made meals such as convenience of cooking and affordability. Download these nails equipment that can be made ready in less than 3 to 5 minutes. For instance, the cooking time for noodles is less than 2 minutes. Similarly these quick meals are not only easy and convenient to make they are very affordable also this is because the cost of buying a ready to serve meal is less than half the cost of purchasing cooking ingredients for home cooked meals. Home cook meal home cooked meals usually take longer to cook while ready-made are almost instant.
In conclusion although there are disadvantages to the consumption of ready made meals health challenges and obesity, I believe that the advantages convenience and affordability far outweigh the disadvantages when compared to home cooked meals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 437, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'healthier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: healthier
...health challenges. Conversely, food are more healthier and are less likely to lead to health p...
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Line 6, column 267, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...ime for noodles is less than 2 minutes. Similarly these quick meals are not only easy and...
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Line 8, column 137, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'advantages'' or 'advantage's'?
Suggestion: advantages'; advantage's
...llenges and obesity, I believe that the advantages convenience and affordability far outwe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, however, if, may, similarly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96296296296 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73784631949 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548148148148 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5337735077 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7142857143 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340354255621 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104872067371 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613010615625 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174485065457 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476403278982 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.