Library is an essential platform for each one of us to know and explore more things in across all subjects.We know that there are many public libraries which are organized by Universities, Government and other sector. However we can't deny the fact that today's World is evolving into digitalization platform.
Accordingly to this essay topic, it says that the above said Latter is replacing former . In this context , I would certainly agree with it .
Digitalization is booming across globe and it brings more convenient ways in which we carry out any things. Lots of us, use this digitalization daily in our life activities in most aspects like copying Files, taking print out, playing movies in digital CDs and DVDs.Lots of electronic devices are made digital especially Watches we wear , Motorcycle , Cars , Ac having digital technologies.
Sticking to this essay topic, Now days there is steady decrease in total number of people visiting public library owing to digitalization and public libraries are not updated periodically and incur more costs for maintenance . Using eLearning facilities especially, online course influencing many students to opt rather than going library to refer books. We can instantaneously get information across anything that we required. Most importantly ,the more we use digital system the less we contribute to Global warming . Digitalization also plays significant role in supporting Go Green World by reducing deforestation process of cutting down trees for making papers and books.
Finally, I would like to conclude that by 2025 we would be able to see only digitalization across all places not only in replacing Libraries if we encourage all our Friends on same .Let's go Digital India.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36263736264 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02547200157 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648351648352 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.2345277544 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148347547229 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052978036019 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379657805859 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817757906062 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164737944865 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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