Dear Daniel,
I am so glad to be able to spend time with each one of you. We were finally able to materialize the plan that was being delayed for ages. I saw the pictures and was reminiscing about the time we all spent. I can never thank you enough for these wonderful pictures which will be embossed in my head for the rest of our lives.
However, you must be wondering, what took me so long to respond, but let me tell you that the delay was caused by my impromptu business trip to Atlanta. This project in Atlanta has been nearing completion and was hit by a last moment glitch. However, I made sure to file a closure report by the end of the month.
The trip we took was last month, but it feels like forever. I want to see you and Samantha again, as such I have decided to host you guys at my new home. I have spare rooms which need to feel your presence. No excuses will be entertained.
I can’t wait to have you guys around.
Yours lovingly,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...have you guys around. Yours lovingly, Brad Jason
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2513368984 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25826793929 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652406417112 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2152741652 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.1538461538 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3846153846 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92307692308 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211806968515 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070291667873 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050549502541 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126421947702 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250467349795 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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