In these days working people seems to devote less time for exercise and because of this serious health issues such as obesity, heart diseases will occur. This is mainly because of strenuous busy lifestyle where people usually tend to spend their free time in watching television, playing video games and filed into social media platforms instead of any physical activities.
People are busy with their work-life, they are trying hard to meet personal as well as professional commitments, as a result they barely get anytime for relaxation or to exercise. For example, many people are working overtime or even moonlighting to earn more for achieving their goals, by the end of the day they will left with no stamina to perform physical exercise to stay in shape. Additionally, even when the get lesiure time people normally stick with their computer, television or with mobile phone, which they waste time in playing games and updating social networks such as Facebook or Twitter.
One of the most effective way to tackle this issue is to create awareness about the health problems that will arise as the outcome of physical inactivity. People should be encouraged to workout to stay fit. The government along with the companies should launch campaign to showcase the significance of healthy lifestyle. Moreover, private companies should focus on employees healthy providing enough facilities and leisure time activities to reduce their stress level and also should promote out door sports which will ultimately enhance their productivity.
To conclude, the busy sedentary lifestyle is the major reason for various health issues where people avoid exercise. Creating awareness and encouraging routine physical activity are the best way to solve this matter.
- You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your lettergive the details of the partythe reason why the party was 73
- You recently received a letter from your friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.Say why he/she would not enjoy going to collegeExplain why getting a job is a good idea for hom/her 73
- Many people think that important things in life are mostly free or can’t be bought. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience. 67
- You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.-Say what the part 73
- many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result.Why do many working people not get enough exercise?What can be done about this problem? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'leave'
Suggestion: leave
... goals, by the end of the day they will left with no stamina to perform physical exe...
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Line 4, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s issue is to create awareness about the health problems that will arise as the o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, well, for example, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32258064516 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59932506535 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594982078853 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.2306348668 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288384702803 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983548374297 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642225734429 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150453037446 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690436935214 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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