You borrowed an important textbook during the last term from a classmate. You now realize your classmate had returned home overseas and you still have the book.
Write a letter to him/her. In your letter:
• apologize for the mistake
• find out how important the book is to him/her
• say what you will do
Dear Mark,
Hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. I am writing in regards to inform you that I still have the important text-book which I borrowed from you last week and forgot to return.
I would like to firstly thank you for lending me this book and I would like to apologize for this mistake as due to a busy schedule during the last semester I forgot to return it. To elucidate the textbook really helped me in my preparation for the last term examinations as it covered all the critical aspects of the subject in detail.
May I know how important this textbook is to you?.if it is important and you need it urgently then, in that case, I will mail it to your overseas mailing address if you can wait then in case you can collect it from me when your return back to college.
I look forward to your earliest response and seeing you soon.
Yours loving
Ben
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| 2019-03-29 | Richa Dhiman | 73 | view |
| 2019-03-29 | Richa Dhiman | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mark, Hope this letter finds you in the pink o...
^^^
Line 2, column 69, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...n the pink of your health. I am writing in regards to inform you that I still have the import...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 229, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...se you can collect it from me when your return back to college. I look forward to your ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onse and seeing you soon. Yours loving Ben
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, may, really, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 724.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36144578313 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30684353005 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590361445783 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.4511893245 44.8134815571 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.428571429 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 4.34317383033 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.473328244944 0.216113520407 219% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193442190065 0.0766984524023 252% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919231333987 0.0603063233224 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265348756491 0.12726935374 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111521513005 0.0580467560999 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.