Some people encourage young children to leave their parents house as soon as they become adults while other say children should stay at their parents house as long as possible.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, children seems to be more independently than any century before. they want more space belong to themselves. So that someone said that children should move out from their parents’ home when they are 18 years old. From my point of view, this opinion should be accept partly. this assay will give a reasonable discussion.
Primarily, young people really need to learn how to take care for their daily routine. For example, wash dishes and clothes, someone used to ignore all of these because their mothers will do that for them. it means that they been spoiled if they don’t try to live without parents. On the other hand, they also need to learn how to master money alone. Generally speaking, it’s very difficult but important for the rest of one's life.
On the opposite view, living alone without parents might cause young people leak of mentoring. Sometimes one may make some “bad friends” who will teach them bad things such as stealing or fighting. Therefore, it has a serious negative influence to their future. Personally speaking, young people must get in touch with their parents closely even though they moved out.
In conclusion, parents need led young people to the right way towards the career, it’s a hard task on account of whether spoiling them or kicking them out is all wrong behavior. The government should publish some policy to regulation this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11965811966 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48235794296 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688034188034 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0170410546 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.875 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.625 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239093531612 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723975439912 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501824999042 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138391093846 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445408802801 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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