You are looking for a part-time job at a football club.
Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter,
introduce yourself
explain what experience and special skills you have
tell him/her when you think you could start
Dear Sir,
I am writing a letter to inquire about a part time vacancy at your football club.
I am a 35-year-old student graduated with a degree in sports education from Auburn University in Auburn, Alabama. I was born in Atlanta, Georgia but I am residing in Hartford, Connecticut right now.
As far as my experience is concerned, I have 10 years of experience as an assistant coach in a local football club in Hartford. I used to be a defensive player during my college tenure and can read various situations in the game. Additionally, I worked as a swimming instructor during the weekend at the gym in my community.
I am willing to start as soon as possible also and can be flexible in work timings. I am attaching my resume with this letter. I would be grateful if you could please consider my application.
I look forward to hearing from you.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing a letter to inquire about a...
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Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... am writing a letter to inquire about a part time vacancy at your football club. I am...
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Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...m Auburn University in Auburn, Alabama. I was born in Atlanta, Georgia but I am r...
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Line 7, column 326, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the weekend at the gym in my community. I am willing to start as soon as possibl...
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Line 9, column 128, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...m attaching my resume with this letter. I would be grateful if you could please c...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...uld please consider my application. I look forward to hearing from you.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 711.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64705882353 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92186835912 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660130718954 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8668261558 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217309782699 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833910334776 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089456491732 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138273023263 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100209516731 0.0580467560999 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.