Some say that people working in different job roles should get different amounts of holiday time. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.
It is believed by some that the extent of holiday leave should differ for employees occupying disparate positions. While the author of this essay disagrees than the amount of holiday time should vary based on a hierarchical role, the writer’s view is that the extent of leave should be dependent primarily on job’s requirements.
On the one hand, the number of annual leave should not vary based solely on the seniority of the position. In other words, people who occupy different hierarchical positions but perform their duties in the same working environment should have an equal amount of vacation per year. To illustrate, office workers are exposed to relatively equal conditions and equally sacrifice their health regardless of their positions and responsibilities, therefore, there are no real reasons for them to have a different amount of holiday. For that reason, this essay disagrees that the amount of holiday should vary depending on job roles.
On the other hand, the amount of holiday time should be different for occupations that require different physical resources. For example, comparing a store clerk with a worker in a coal mine, the latter is exposed to harsher conditions, such as the ambient temperature, air pollution and safety risks, which hardships should be compensated. Consequently, to have an opportunity for recovery, people working in difficult conditions should be granted lengthier holiday. In addition, such differences might help recruit more employees for health demanding occupations, which is in the best interest of society.
Overall, although some people think that the length of a holiday should differ based on the person’s occupation, the author of this essay believe that the amount of annual holiday should not depend on a hierarchical position, but should correlate with the employee’s expenditure of energy and exposure to health risks.
- Nowadays in many countries women have full time jobs. Therefore, it is logical to share household tasks evenly between men and women. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 73
- Some say that people working in different job roles should get different amounts of holiday time Do you agree or disagree Give your opinion and examples from your own experience 82
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45454545455 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00263840417 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508417508418 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.0085633685 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.272727273 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259481188256 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118227318538 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645062041107 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178878268912 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192021935919 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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