Although sources such as TV or the internet are so impressive on a student life but teachers are the most prominent characters in society. It’s undeniable that students learn the most significant life lessons from teachers whether in school or university. Because, years between teenage to adulthood are the most effective years of a human. This essay will explain why I agree with this theory.
From the moment an adolescent enters school he or she would encounter a long period of his or her vital life in schools and universities. Teachers nurture students in various ways. Not also they teach school or university lessons yet they teach lessons of life to students. Lessons that are even more crucial to their life. They’ll know how to behave with their peers, adults and elderly people in society. For instance, they would learn how to respect to people who are older than themselves. When they are in sitting on a seat on the bus and an elderly or a woman enters too and there isn’t any other free seat, they should let the elderly or that woman. Or if they’re standing in a queue, they shouldn’t take place of others and wait for their turn.
On the other hand, other sources like TV and internet have some effects on a student life also. For instance, when a student is watching performance of a celebrity and his wearing seems interesting the
Student would appeal to it and would wear the same clothes as he or she does.
To sum up, student age is the most effective years of a youngster. And the person or source that has the most impressive on
a student is his or her teacher.
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- Music should not be taught in schools instead other subjects such as computer and science should be taught.Do you agree or disagree with this statement. 73
- Some people believe that in order for a hobby to be enjoyable, it needs to be difficult in some way. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion in clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree and disagree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...achers whether in school or university. Because, years between teenage to adulthood are...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...net have some effects on a student life also. For instance, when a student is watchi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ty and his wearing seems interesting the Student would appeal to it and would wea...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r source that has the most impressive on a student is his or her teacher.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for instance, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7323943662 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60746985179 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524647887324 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6182959629 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254393760382 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898374629364 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569724170233 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121781932929 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055087685689 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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