Nowadays people try to balance their life and work with other things in life, but actually some could achieve it so far, what are the reasons for this. how can be solve this problem.
Lifestyle has undergone dramatic changes over a couple of decades. Presently, masses are unable to handle work and personal activities. Here, I would like to account it's reasons along with it's solutions.
There are manifold reasons of this phenomenon. First and foremost, full time job of people reduce their interest of doing other things. To illustrate, masses have to work round the clock for more earning, so that they can manage their astronomical outlays in this era of inflation. Moreover, more time in working sectors make people tired and less energetic .Therefore, people find difficulties to do other activities due to hectic schedule. Apart from it, folks do not plan their routine work in advance and they forget things. As a result, without planing people face inconvenience and problems for doing official and other work.
Some solutions can be taken to restrain the problem. Initially, proper management and planing of the day will help masses to deal with every aspect of life. To demonstrate, people should do work according to schedule .In this way, their life would be more balanced. Furthermore, people should try to avoid doing multiple job. These will help them to give time for other activities and they feel less tired and energetic for other work. What is more, masses have to take some holidays for regular job and do other pending work.
To recapitulate, Undeniably, work is worship.However, still I believe that people must give preference to other work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, apart from, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14403292181 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69034475835 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0482864865 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.125 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1875 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328704931723 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106909705709 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575444632682 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176102798575 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0991877709955 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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