The charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparison where relevant.
The pie charts depict the proportion of five distinct books sold by shopkeeper between 1972 to 2012.
The most striking feature to be observed is that fiction books was gaining more prevalence among adults.
It can be vividly seen that, in 1972, juveniles fiction, adults fiction and biography books were equally reported with 20 percent. Travel books stood at lowest position with 15 percent while all other books reported with largest 25 percent. From 1992, adult fiction had highest 25 percent followed by children fiction, all other books and travel books with 22, 20, and 18 percent respectively.
Turning to rest of description, in 2012, adults fiction led with largest 45 percent whereas children fiction, all other books, travel books occupied second third and fourth position with 25, 12 and 10 percent orderly. As far as comparison is concerned. the sale of adult fiction was doubled in 2012 compare to 1972. In 1972, the biography books sold more compare to 1992 and 2012.
- some people say that government should spend money on faster public transport others think that money should be spend on different aspects such as cost reduction and environment conservation discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- scientists agree that many people eat too much junk food and it is damaging their health some people think that this problem can be solved by educating people while others believe that education will not work discuss both views and give your own opinion 68
- Some people believe that physical fitness of strong individual and teams is the reason for most sport achievements. Others think that mental attitude is more important. discuss both views and give your own opinion. 78
- Some people believe that childrens leisure activities must be educational. otherwise they are complete waste of time. do you agree or disagree with the statement. give reason of your answer and include example from experience. 56
- some people think that paying taxes is enough to use society others argue that being a citizen involved more responsibilities discuss what is your opinion 68
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, third, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09202453988 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39240206481 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59509202454 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.5265723129 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2222222222 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169411103227 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101269382119 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753640128835 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138934381777 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857563447153 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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