Commitment and fellowship are required tremondus amount of willingness. Most of the people think that, in the age of under 30 people should be make the decision of marriage. In my opinion, I agree with this statement. There are plethora amount of benefits. I will debate this topic through assumptions.
On the first hand, early marriage is groom the self interest between two people. They are more committed and understand to each other in very postive manner. They show there love, care and respect openly. For example, if we talk about yesteryear marriage so, they were more secure and long lasting commitment because most of the younger people understood the value of relationship.
On the other hand, if we talk about medical point of view. So, they recommend early marriage just because of, in the age of under 30 human being have more energetic power and they can easily drawback any kind of diseases . For instances, during the birth of new born baby the proverbial mother are too much weak, but in the case of early age pregancy they can easily recover.
On the contrary side, early age has some drawback also in the form of lack of understanding, joint family system etc However, I personally believe that the benefit are outweighed rather than disadvantages.
I put in it nutshell, I pen down saying that, the successful early age marriage ratio is higher than late age marriage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: made
...in the age of under 30 people should be make the decision of marriage. In my opinion...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, for example, for instance, kind of, in my opinion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91561181435 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61213793663 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616033755274 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.8050145603 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2142857143 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144900357708 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456605583173 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486816729039 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685235288896 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596079298215 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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