It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society?
Do you agree or disagree?
Marriage is an important step in everyone's life and people suggests that getting married before 30 years would help individually and for society as well. I am in favour of this opinion that indeed it will immensely help to manage our life better if we do hold hands with our life partner earlier than 30 years.
Firstly, the individual merits of marrying at a younger age are, we will be able to enjoy our new life when we are at the peak of good health. Also, we may able to socialize with new people well than the older people. For example, as we grew older, we become more rigid and egoist. Hence we may not able to accept others opinion and it may result in conflicts. Moreover, it gives us a better opportunity to raise our offspring in good manner and provide them a better life before we attain retirement
Secondly, marrying at an older age hampers the society because several researchers state that the delayed marriage declines the birth rate considerably. Furthermore, the likelihood of giving birth to autism babies are higher for aged parents when compared to the younger ones. It will be difficult to raise our children at an older age because our ideas or opinions may not sink with them due to age gap.
To conclude, I strongly agree that marrying at a younger age will help us to lead a better life and build a strong and healthy society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...older, we become more rigid and egoist. Hence we may not able to accept others opinio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60245901639 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45158371226 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549180327869 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2690934573 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.3 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149869967843 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676201921874 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712457269293 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976310479982 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640251618386 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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