Some people think that human history has been a journey from ignorance to knowledge. Others argue that this underestimates the achievements of ancient cultures, and overvalues our accomplishments. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
some people believe that government budgets should spend on science subjects more than others to develop countries. In my opinion, while focus on technology could bring to the country progress some benefits, i think that other subjects are as important and need to have a reasonable investment as science.
On the one hand, i can understand why these people suppose that scientific subjects are more invested by government because of some following reasons. Firstly, it is undeniable that technology is a powerful tool which makes one country develop faster and be more competitive. Therefore, the more students follow science subject, the more intellectual workers join in labor market. Secondly, investing in teaching science means that scientists and students could been taught with modern devices and laboratories. Thus, more significant inventions will be came up with and promote national brand.
However, in the other hand, it is not justice for students good at other subjects which not relevant to technology fields such as art, psychology or economic… while scientific students are provided a good condition to study by government fundings, others in different majors are not. This makes talented people feel unfair and immigrate to countries where has a better meritocracy sooner or later. In the other word, brain drain will come as a consequence which evidently is a great losing to develop the country in the future.
In conclusion, despite of investing in teaching science is still necessary goal, i believe that government should not underestimate the importance of other fields which also need to be invested for development’s countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41923076923 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94912232456 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561538461538 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6238873792 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.090909091 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1818181818 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0978326936843 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397968021659 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318140655562 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0671654817688 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366914749111 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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