Dear sir or madam
I am wiring in connection with a meeting which was organized in your hotel on the 1st November for the employees of the ‘Avanta’ company. According to the feedback given by the guests they thoughroughly enjoyed hotel facilities, particularly the outstanding design of the building and furnishing, as well as the quality of reception and transfer provided.
However, in spite of the overall contentment with hotel amenities the participant of the meeting reported being dissatisfied with the quality of food served for lunch. All colleagues agreed on the fact that the food was stale, specially bread and some of the salad and the meat was tough and undercooked. One of the gust complain about having abdominal discomfort after the lunch, though not leading to any serious problems.
Taking into consideration the above said, we would appreciate it if you stablish a better control over the kitchen and the cooking process. Considering all favorable reports that where heard about the hotel so far we are not going to live any negative feedback officially. We hope that this was simply a misfortune accident and the fame of your hotel will not suffer from it.
Faithfully yours,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...the food was stale, specially bread and some of the salad and the meat was tough and underc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, as to, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11616161616 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95236905077 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656565656566 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.5962483084 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.625 76.5299724578 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 16.8248392259 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309548800724 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958395788687 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648197272748 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186778234881 0.12726935374 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041454023416 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 8.37731958763 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 70.7449484536 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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