The majority of news being reported bad news such as wars, famines, accidents and crime.
Why do you think that is?
Do you think news should be a balance of both good and bad news?
Give appropriate and relevant examples from your personal experience where you can.
News has become ubiquitous in today’s life. Technological advancement has made it possible to fosters the spread of news within a minute or less. The conundrum is, most of the news being broadcasted is negative such as civil wars, natural calamities, felony, and mishaps. This epidemic adverse news regime is due to the prompt reaction from the public.
To begin with, negative news has been becoming more entertaining and therefore quick public reaction is obvious. This reaction has the capacity to increase publications reputation in the market. Additionally, nowadays, live news are more in demand, where people can acknowledge about live incidents such as catastrophe, border military issues, fire accidents or prisoners internal fights. For example, New York times had broadcasted live footage of the world trade centre being destroyed, since then it became the top news channel of America. In this way more and more competitors started to record and publish similar activities over news and got undisputed attention from the public. This trend continues since the first event took place back in 2006.
This trend should be stopped by serving some positive news by the channels. This will enable to bring overall positive surrounding and therefore positivity to citizens life. Watching reported bad news could be the fun for a while, but it certainly brings anxiety and make pace for atrocity in one’s mind over time. In this case, balance is quintessential nowadays to spread positivity and maintain one’s mental health. For instance, the American government has contemplated that, after negative news had been publicised, their crime ratio had skyrocketed. The government had implied some restriction on news channels and found positive results in following years in terms of decreasing crime rate.
To deduce, it is necessary to spread positivity via news to maintain peace and harmony in the society. All the governments should put some implications to stop these channels reporting bad news, perpetually.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ing some positive news by the channels. This will enable to bring overall positive s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43533123028 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85391865254 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608832807571 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8137903711 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7222222222 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6111111111 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268623695673 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888787090573 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536707982921 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180273796458 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327331133124 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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