Dear sir/ madam
I Navjot Singh and currently working as English instructor at private school in New Delhi , India. I am writing this letter because today I received my home stay host family details from my English and Home-stay program manager via Email. I felt fortunate and thankful to your family who are hosting my summer 4 week trip in New Zealand.
Presently, I am so excited to meet you and your family. Furthermore please provide me some directions to reach your home from Wellington airport and also arrange the local cab to go at event location 35 Church Road North Wellington.
Lastly, I am arriving on 19 February 2019 around 11:00 p.m. Flight number 6ke512 Qantas airline Delhi Singapore Wellington. I have 3 hours halt at Singapore airport.
Looking forward to see your reply as soon as possible regarding my concerned information. Moreover, I am attaching my telephone and email details with this letter.
Thanking you
Yours Truly
Navjot Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir/ madam I Navjot Singh and currently working as...
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Dear sir/ madam I Navjot Singh and currently working as English instructor ...
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Suggestion: ,
...nstructor at private school in New Delhi , India. I am writing this letter because...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd Home-stay program manager via Email. I felt fortunate and thankful to your fam...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'trip' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'trips'.
Suggestion: trips
...family who are hosting my summer 4 week trip in New Zealand. Presently, I am so ...
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Suggestion: Furthermore,
...so excited to meet you and your family. Furthermore please provide me some directions to re...
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Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Wellington' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'Wellingtons'.
Suggestion: Wellingtons
... at event location 35 Church Road North Wellington. Lastly, I am arriving on 19 Februa...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
... Singapore airport. Looking forward to see your reply as soon as possible regardin...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...etails with this letter. Thanking you Yours Truly Navjot Singh
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...letter. Thanking you Yours Truly Navjot Singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, lastly, look, moreover, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08695652174 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62374726061 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.732919254658 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8307303307 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242938171266 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950082559839 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653910652507 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115075536309 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066076064457 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.