It is argued that few men and women like to spend free time with their co-workers, whereas others deem to isolate personal life from their professional life. While spending free time with workmates assist to enhance understandability, I believe that having good spare time with family members is way more important which I will elucidate in following paragraphs.
On the one hand, leisure time is spent by some people with their colleagues because they think that it will help them to understand their workmates. Consequently, staff-members will communicate with each-other without any hesitation which is beneficial for the organization. Secondly, people who are working at lower position, prefer to spend time with their seniors; so, they could learn new things from them. For example, one of my friends spends his weekend with his managers because he thinks that it would help him to acquire new skills.
On the other hand, there are ample of reasons due to which several people like to separate their work life and private life. First and foremost, it is believed that excessive hours with staff-members could cause deterrent effects in family life. Therefore, some people avoid to amalgamate professional and personal life. In addition to that, a fear of exposure of real image could be the another reason. That is to say that, in the presence of higher management at any function, everyone has to follow certain etiquette and mannerism. Hence, because of the above-mentioned reasons people do not want to spend time with their colleagues.
To recapitulate, although, to know workmates as well as to comprehend new traits could be the reasons that few people prefer to spend time with their staff-members, I believe that to create an equilibrium between personal and private life and fear of revealing true character are the reasons to avoid spending leisure time with co-workers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid amalgamating'.
Suggestion: avoid amalgamating
... in family life. Therefore, some people avoid to amalgamate professional and personal life. In addi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., because of the above-mentioned reasons people do not want to spend time with th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, as to, for example, in addition, as well as, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19281045752 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86617702485 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542483660131 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7432800196 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.230769231 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6923076923 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410266533605 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155109161154 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123644320137 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262538895143 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269301396761 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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