Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
It is believed that few men and women want to enjoy their free time with their workmates whereas some people give priority to their privacy and maintain distance with their work life. Although, distinction between both lives is good to some extent, I believe that quality time with co-workers would give fruitful results and this essay will justify both the arguments.
Admittedly, if people separate their private life and work life then they can not only enjoy without stress but can also relax themselves without getting anxious about work. Moreover, despite of having good communication with fellow workers, due to the trust issues, people usually do not amalgamate private life with work life. Additionally, to some extent, people have a fear to expose their internal behavior, if they intermingle with their companions. Furthermore, some time people can not enjoy at the fullest because of some restrictions. For example, if employees do a party with their senior executives then they have to be in discipline, even in the party. However, I believe that leisure time should be spent with co-workers.
Conversely, there are plethora of reasons that support to spend free time with colleagues. Firstly, people can know each other better which will eventually augment the understanding amidst them. Secondly, internal communication that is one of the key components for betterment of particular company will be increased. Thirdly, people will make new friends and can get more socialize and on top of that can share ideas with each other. To illustrate, when one of my friends starts a new job, he finds interesting friends and learns many things from them. Therefore, it can be substantiated that leisure time should be enjoyed with workmates.
In conclusion, agglomerating all the points although, thinking will vary according to person to person, I believe that it would be proven beneficial, if one chooses to spend free time with their work companions and it is recommended that employer should patronize their employees to enjoy together.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 84, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'to person'.
Suggestion: to person
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, whereas, for example, in conclusion, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25227963526 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77399879885 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550151975684 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5081575586 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.2 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0666666667 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418193517549 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140132041539 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117555079465 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265177080619 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137200612196 0.056905535591 241% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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