Dear Daniel,
A letter from me has never been something that you have liked because, as you say, it is a sign of negativity. I have long tried to send a positive message but has rarely worked out till now.
As you know, I have been working with a US based conglomerate and it has kept my schedule unpredictable. Due to the said reasons, I will have to cancel our meeting that was promised for next week on Tuesday and beg for your forgiveness. I will make it up to you, I promise.
The company had written to me for intimating that I will be going to an offshore assignment on Saturday. The project has hit a glitch at the last moment and has to be completed by Monday morning. I have a feeling that I will not be able to make it back on time and as such do not want to keep you hanging.
As you know, Samantha’s birthday party is scheduled for last Saturday of the month and we anyway have to catch up before the said date for deciding a gift, I will not bail out on you for that and we will meet at the Glenwood Mall on last Friday of the month. Later we can grab lunch or something.
I know you must be dejected and annoyed with me, but life has not been kind to me, please forgive me.
I can’t wait to meet you.
Yours lovingly,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Daniel, A letter from me has never been somethin...
^^^^^
Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s;t wait to meet you. Yours lovingly, Brad Jason
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, if, so, as to, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.19105691057 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43769950466 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569105691057 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9647825638 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3076923077 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341818905476 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117929080043 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658514734029 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170371729448 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586534641486 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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