The technological revolution brings us to the modern era that has undeniably changed our lives to be more convenient. Therefore, the technological progress becomes the important part in our lives. The more technology progress, the faster life will be. For example, technology has simplified the access of people in education, medicine and communication.
The contemporary technology helps people to get education easily. Adults wanting to advance their education lack of free time to drive to the educational institution, but nowadays people can receive distant education by attending online classes. Moreover, another learning method known as the e-learning method makes us to have easier access to our learning material. Consequently, we can study anytime and anywhere according to our schedule. Furthermore, with the exception of our computer or mobile device, by using e-learning we generally don't need other expenses.
The technological advances have benefits our lives with significant medical improvement. The medical field has successfully transplanted heart with specialized equipment. Meanwhile, doctors can make more accurate diagnoses by using online patient medical data. Patient can also be easier to consult with their doctor through website and email. Consequently, many people suffering from diseases and illness can have a higher chance of surviving.
The existence of social media is one of the impacts of technology development. The development of computers and internet makes us to be easier to communicate with other people. We can be connected with many people all over the world by using social media, such as Skype, WhatsApp, etc. Social media also provides us the information of other people, so we can get other people information easily. Furthermore, this technology is also very useful for those who live away from their home countries. The use of computer helps them to keep in touch with their family and friends whom they left in their home countries.
In conclusion, the development of technology makes our lives to be easier especially in the access of education, medicine, and communication.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 456, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...according to our schedule. Furthermore, with the exception of our computer or mobile device, by using...
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Line 2, column 542, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...evice, by using e-learning we generally dont need other expenses. The technological...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51681957187 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04488887775 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532110091743 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2622270723 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.9047619048 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5714285714 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.19047619048 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0551630959539 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0206357807784 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0188669005334 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0365103382746 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0141787569267 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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