It is observed that in this fast-paced life many people have no time to take care of their health, which leads to chronic diseases and severe health problems later. In this essay, we will see the main factors resulting in these situations and some rectification measures that could be used to avoid such.
Firstly, health is wealth it is a well-known proverb. However, rampant changes in the market and urge to increase revenues by the organization implement a perpetual pressure on employe to perform better. Employees often work 24/7, under stress just to get the targets on time, consequently they ignore their health. According to research by a prominent health magazine "The Life", around sixty-five percent of the worker in companies suffer from cervical and migraine issue. Apart from this, in old age, they have the money but only to spend at the hospitals.
However, solid actions should be taken by the organizations by considering the importance of the health of their employees. They can organize some health campaigns at the company's premises, organizations should also provide dedicated time to employees to spend at the gym. Also, with all the good facilities and a proficient instructor should be there. Although many top organizations also organize some marathons to spread awareness among the people about health, numbers are few. It is individual responsibility also to do regular exercise and focus on a good diet.
In conclusion, companies should reduce the stress level of employees by providing certain health breaks. On the other hand, individuals should also think in the perspective of a healthy lifestyle instead of just focusing on earning money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increasing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'urge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: increasing
... rampant changes in the market and urge to increase revenues by the organization implement ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, apart from, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28148148148 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85563962023 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614814814815 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2584192195 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.857142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205822564835 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618142882661 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631293120725 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106118243832 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581002814963 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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