The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called Salmon.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The figures illustrate from the beginning to the adult stages of salmon. The salmon needs to pass three stages to change to adult and the lifespan is about a decade.
The first step is that the adult salmon goes back to upper river where the water is slow moving. After they reached upper river, they look for the reeds and small stones in tend to lay the eggs. The 3-8 cm long fries emerged from the eggs between the stones after staying in eggs long from 5 to 6 months approximately.
Then, the fries go to the fast flowing place of lower river and they spend about 4 years at there. At this step, the young salmon called smolt developed to 12-15 cm. The next step is that the smolts travel to the open sea and waste the half of their lives (approximately 5 years) at there. At the final, 70-76 cm adult salmon back to upper river and end their life cycle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t and the lifespan is about a decade. The first step is that the adult salmon goe...
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Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o upper river and end their life cycle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 698.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28220858896 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.99721285716 2.65546596893 75% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558282208589 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.3787316695 43.030603864 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.5555555556 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0662741257369 0.215688989381 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322045662524 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307177083545 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0447632330582 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00980497281262 0.0819641961636 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.2329268293 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 61.2550243902 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 11.4140731707 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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