Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement?
Today, business is developing in many countries and production industry is larger than previous times. Most of the people believe that they have many things to choose for the specific goods in the market. I personally disagree with the view that we have still limited choices.
Those who agree with the view that they have many chances to pick up a specific thing among variety products provide a number of reasons to support their idea. By trying to get better qualities and customers’ satisfication, many companies compete in the manufacturing of popular products with the original product produced companies. The consumers got many benefits from the companies doing this. The buyers can get the best quality product what meets with their define criteria.
On the other hand, those who oppose the above idea have their own respective points as well. If look at the general, there have a variety of brands to choose but if you go to the market, the limited sources offer what is match your needs. By my experience, I want to study the Development Studies for my Master degree. Many university around the world offering the course what I want but if I go to the specific subjects what I really want to learn, many universities were automatically eliminated from my list because of their provide subjects.
To sum up, quality assurance is playing in the important role in the results of emerging a lot of similar things in the market. After that, the quality of products also bring the huge gap between the goods price.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g the huge gap between the goods price.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, still, well, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88076923077 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6246977848 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580769230769 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6096721557 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6153846154 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205010276633 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711929880532 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638004174179 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11371967744 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805181049357 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.