Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
The world is smaller day after day and seems as a village because of the technology and infrastructure development. Today in developing world, people can go easily to and from in or out of the country. The export and import sector are also significantly expanded in almost all of the countries start from the year 2000. It is often debated between pros and cons of globalization. I personally support the view that the world becoming a village can brings some negative points.
Those who agree with the view that globalization presents a number of reasons to support their idea. If the people want to get something, they can get easily within the country. This save their time and energy. They can do shopping over the world from sitting at their home and through screens.
However, the opponents of the above idea offer their respective points as well. The meaning of travelling is to explore and looking for the differences between countries. Travelling cannot give any taste if the countries are similar. Local context will be disappeared and the feelings of excited will not last long. What’s more, the branded materials can get in most of the countries but the quantity of products may differ based on the developing or developed and underdeveloped countries.
To sum up, the price range will also different from the manufacturing countries and export countries. This can effect the country’s income in export sector as well. This can also impact the travel and tourism sector in somehow.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: all the
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, well, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01195219124 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81352765088 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573705179283 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9663284038 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7647058824 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.17647058824 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185363877032 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517077629432 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480249390176 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100132986463 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324286322868 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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