Overall, there was a decrease in the number of elephants in most countries such as Vietnam, India, Malaysia, Sri Lanka, Laos, Myanmar, Thailand and China, with the highest number in India and the smallest in China.
In 1997, the number of elephants stood at near 10000 in India, which was significantly higher than the second highest - Myanmar, at around 5000. Meanwhile, Thailand had near 4000 elephants, Malaysia and Sri Lanka were similar in the figure, at about 3000. The remaining countries had a smaller number, at roughly 1000 for each.
The next 7 years saw the number of elephants in India, Malaysia and Thailand decreased considerably in around 8000, 1000 and 1000 respectively. The number of elephants also declined slowly in the others, except for Cambodia when there was a rise in this country's figure. China continued to be the country which had the smallest number of elephants.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...round 8000, 1000 and 1000 respectively. The number of elephants also declined slowl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, while, except for, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06081081081 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62150778168 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574324324324 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7815559701 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.083189646488 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440163381729 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0206339944349 0.0843802449381 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0648845364644 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016648813646 0.0819641961636 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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