The charts below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2000 and 2010, with projected sales for 2020.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the amount of magazines was bought per head in five different countries in 2000 and 2010, with sales forecast for 2020.
Overall, country B accounted for the highest number of magazines sold per person while the countries E always occupied the lowest place.
For the country A, the quantity of magazines was purchased was 49 in 2010 and declined to 44 in 2010. In 2020, the amount of magazines sold is predicted to fall to 48. Similarly, the country B had the quantity of magazines sold per person reduced slightly from 50 in 2000 to 47 in 2010 and it is expected to drop to 46 in 2020. Likewise, the country C also showed a similar trend. The amount of magazines sold per head decreased from 47 in 2000 to 45 in 2010 and is forecasted to continue dipping to 43 in 2020.
In contrast, the country D has an upward trend. The number of magazines per person was 17 in 2000 and rise to 19 in 2010. It is projected to increase to 22 in 2020. Meanwhile, the amount of magazines sold per person of country fluctuated over the time. It was 7 in 2000 and rise to 9 in 2010. The figure leveled off and is expected to go down to 7 in 2020
- Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 60
- Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in a group while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both view and give your opinion. 56
- The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate. 73
- Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways to reduce crime. Discuss both views and give your opinions. 56
- As children become adults, their social behavior changes in some ways.What are the main differences between young children’s social behavior and that of adults. To what extend are the changes that took place good? 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, similarly, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26818181818 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50016115183 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445454545455 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6194636646 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2307692308 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9230769231 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406668504312 0.215688989381 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156798534484 0.103423049105 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784795970388 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280877155076 0.15604864568 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336141810991 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 13.2329268293 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.08 61.2550243902 145% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.19 11.4140731707 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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