You would like to participate in a training course. write a letter to your manager about the course and ask for permission.
In your letter,
Give details of the course
why is it useful for you?
How will it benefit your work?
Dear Sir/Ma'am,
I am writing this letter to ask for your permission regarding the training course Creo 2.0 version which will be held on the next month.
I would like to give you a brief information about the training session. This course is about the latest version of designing software Creo in which there will be two training lectures and on the last day, we will have to give a practical examination.
I think this course is very beneficial because Creo 2.0 is the upgraded version of its predecessor. In addition to that, there are lots of new features added in this software which will improve my work-quality.
It will also advantageous for our firm as our company is also going to upgrade the software which are being used. Moreover, ramifications will be in terms of precise work-done with least time due to this new software.
I hope, you will think sincerely about this matter and allow me to take part in this training program.
Yours faithfully,
Mohit Ratnu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 177, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the least'.
Suggestion: with the least
...s will be in terms of precise work-done with least time due to this new software. I hop...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...am. Yours faithfully, Mohit Ratnu
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, regarding, so, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88165680473 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64504321942 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597633136095 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2127060566 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6666666667 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 4.34317383033 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251001125157 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107662128206 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755219198027 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137093421632 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866906750824 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.