Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents today are more involved in their children`s education than were parents in the past.
Nowadays, education is one of the most important aspects of children's lives and they try hard to excel in their lessons. when it comes to the parents' involvement in their children's education some controversy arises. ome people believe parents are more involved in this issue now. Although some may oppose it, I agree with this idea. In the ensuing lines, I will explain two reasons to substantiate my response.
First, in comparison with the last decades, parents are more educated. Rarely were people literate decades ago, therefore, they were not able to help their children even if they wanted. However, these days most of the parents have a university degree and they have broad knowledge to help their offsprings. For instance, my grandmother told me when she was a student she had nobody to help her with lessons and she had to go to her teachers' houses to find her answers.
Second, the number of children have decreased drastically rather than in the past. when parents are responsible for many kids, they do not have enough time to allocate to each of them. Consequently, they cannot be involved in their offspring's education. now, there are at most two or three children in each family, hence, parents have more free time. they take children to different classes, they talk about their kids' education with teachers and get them a tutor if needed.
Third, parents are aware of how imperative is children's education. So crucial is education that parents are ready to spend a lot of money to send their kids to the best schools. As they know education directly affects children's future career and social position, they are ready to dedicate everything for their education. take my father as an example, his parents disagreed with him going to college but he went and he has always been concerned with my grades and performance at school. he insists on me getting my master degree because he believes there is nothing more important than learning.
In conclusion, according to the aforementioned explanations and examples, I believe, nowadays, parents are more involved in their children's education because they are more educated than before, they have fewer children and more free time and finally, they know about the importance of education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, third, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99734042553 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64614561848 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531914893617 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1835941652 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.95 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361796417572 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118173465154 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639904303321 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222915870478 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368869869 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.