Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
Thanks to the new technology and human being's talent the world is changing at a rapid pace and no two days are the same. However, this issue concerned many individuals about people's satisfaction. Some people believe due to the quick changes people are less contented with their lives than in the past, on the other hand, some people have the opposite idea. Personally speaking, I concur with the latter side. In the ensuing lines, I will explain two reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
First, the better is the economy the happier are people. Nowadays the economy is grossing all around the world and people are able to afford different items. Years ago, only a small group of people accessed to items like cars, cellphones, and foreign trips, whereas most of the people can afford them these days because of the improving economy. For instance, my grandmother told me 70 years ago, only 10 percent of people in her city had car and others had to use horses and carriages which in emergency situations were frustrating.
Second, the advancement in new technology and health care makes life easier and convenient than ever. Each week, people see or hear about new instruments that are invented to facilitate different tasks and people do not need to do mundane tasks anymore like washing dishes or vacuuming houses. Decades ago, so limited was technology that people had to try hard and spend long hours for today’s ordinary tasks like talking to their family members. Besides, technology resulted in new cures for previous fatal disease. In the past, hundreds of people could die for a simple disease but today, doctors can cure most of them. Take Malaria as an example, millions of people died because of it; however, nobody suffers it anymore.
Finally, new political attitudes and people’s awareness have made the world a peaceful place in comparison with the past. The world went through many wars including to horrible world wars but now people are living in a more peaceful place and less number of people lose their lives in battlefields so they can be with their family and enjoy their lives. Although wars continue in few parts of the world especially in the middle east, many parts of the world are in a tranquil situation. For instance, I have an old lady neighbor who lost her five boys in the war in a day. She described for me how hard was life those days and many families and soldiers died and committed suicide because of the harsh situation and famine.
In conclusion, according to the aforementioned explanations and examples, people are more satisfied in their lives than in the past because of a better economy, more technology and health care, and more peace.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
Thanks to the new technology and human beings talent the world is changing at a rapid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2242.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88453159041 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55414266477 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551198257081 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 706.5 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2429188737 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.761904762 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2380952381 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409898209422 0.236089414692 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994145907038 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104486074932 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218326176252 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664358679684 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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