The fear of nuclear weapons is believed to prevent catastrophic war from occurring. Likewise, nuclear power, contributes to a more efficient and affordable source of energy. The idea that the advantages of nuclear technology is much greater than the deficit, will be discussed in details in this essay.
Due to the devastating effects of other forms of energy on the climate, nuclear energy substantially reduces CO2 levels in the environment. This decreases pollution (alleviates symptoms and prevalence of asthma patients). In addition, nuclear energy is beneficial to the low-income households. In other words, this will create an accessible mode of power (such as electricity) to developing countries.
In contrast, there is no doubt about the fact that: nuclear energy has a possibility to spread radiation. This issue has been reported in the news in various occasions; health risk of civilians living in the vicinity where there could be a leakage of nuclear energy is compromised. Furthermore, as a result of this, homes were abandoned. Moreover, another drawback of nuclear energy is a potential of a war to arise. This, once again, has been continuously discussed by politicians and by journalists; will world war 3 happen? The rise in the development of nuclear energy is causing nuclear weapons to become more mainstreamed; could result in the deaths of millions.
In this essay we discussed the questions that can arise due to the use of nuclear technology. These included the positive (which includes: benefit to the climate and affordability of energy). In contrast, the negative; nuclear war and radiation. In my opinion, I completely disagree with the fact that nuclear technology has far fewer disadvantages, as opposed to the advantages.
- The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and even be damaging. Do you agree or disagree? 89
- The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and even be damaging. Do you agree or disagree? 67
- The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and even be damaging. Do you agree or disagree? 78
- The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and even be damaging. Do you agree or disagree? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...electricity to developing countries. In contrast, there is no doubt about the f...
^^
Line 8, column 273, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'disagree that'.
Suggestion: disagree that
... radiation. In my opinion, I completely disagree with the fact that nuclear technology has far fewer disadv...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, likewise, moreover, so, in addition, in contrast, no doubt, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34532374101 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10544799608 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55035971223 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8622684731 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4117647059 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3529411765 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291538577188 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098779896632 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637367306013 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193804015569 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647094841623 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.