With recent developments in technology like e-books, some people feel that printed media like books, newspapers and magazines will soon be a thing of the past. Other feel that these form of media will never disappear. What is your opinion?
With unprecedented advances in digital media, a debate has developed on whether digitalize media like e-books and magazines will replace to the traditional sources of reading materials or advanced media never threats the existence of traditional resources. On the one side of debate are those who claim that digital technology supersedes reading material and in future it would be become popular, while other side is view that physical material still popular with having of good technology gadgets.This essay will discuss both views with my perception.In my mind, I completely agree with former view.
There are manifold points to shore up the former view. First and foremost, today people have no time to read books and newspaper because of they have a stringent schedule. But, most of people have a smart phones and computer systems using that they read various sources any time during traveling and in lunch time.Also, most of news paper already converted into digital form, because it is a cheap for newspaper company. Moreover, for books there are many trees are cut down and it is affects to the environment. In addition, recycling cost of paper are too expensive so, it would be benefited if newspaper and book converted into internet form of sources. As a result we can say that in future people more use advanced form of reading matrials rather than hard form.
Further emphasizing on my point of view, Books and news freuently updated in particular time; so, updating process on internet would be easy as compare to upgrading individuals reading products. Furthermore, e-books will be became popular because using of Artificial intelligence books and newspapers will provides visual reality so, it is easy to understand difficult topics for students. Secondly, many newspaper organization hire a journalist for acquiring information after that they prints and company pays for them but, if here they use internet than this process becomes easy and manageble also they will provide up to date information according to events. For example, in India The Times Of India newspaper prominent for providing e-books whereas we can not forget amazing amazone library where everyone reads the books with minimal cost.
We know that every coin has two side, no exception that the physical form of book still survive because of it is the best source for orthodox people. Also, today many avid readers uses books and magazines and it is the way for earning money in jornalism and publication industry.
To conclude, both sides hold their valid grounds. Undeniably, contribution of technology in reading materials is unavoidable, but we can not say that it will become the only way for reading the books.
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
less content wanted. around 320 words are enough.
you may remove the fourth paragraph which is duplicated to the fifth paragraph.
and the first paragraph is too long.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 443 350
No. of Characters: 2215 1500
No. of Different Words: 237 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.588 4.7
Average Word Length: 5 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.59 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 158 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 133 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 82 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 56 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.688 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.383 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.812 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.32 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.568 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.119 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... with having of good technology gadgets.This essay will discuss both views with my p...
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...l discuss both views with my perception.In my mind, I completely agree with former...
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
...ave no time to read books and newspaper because of they have a stringent schedule. But, most of...
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Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...of they have a stringent schedule. But, most of people have a smart phones and computer system...
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Suggestion: newspaper
...aveling and in lunch time.Also, most of news paper already converted into digital form, be...
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Line 3, column 658, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...onverted into internet form of sources. As a result we can say that in future peop...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
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...r acquiring information after that they prints and company pays for them but, if here ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, whereas, while, for example, in addition, in particular, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2273.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 440.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16590909091 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69073152823 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543181818182 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 727.2 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.7892511308 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0625 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170548341259 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537429514005 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550406144855 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934701677079 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575255804554 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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