International tourism sheds the profound impact on country's economy. However, some opponents reckon that foreign visitors are worse for their nation.Ofcourse,there are couple of reasons behind it. Despite of myraid arguments, there are also a plethora of solutions to curb the problem.
One argument to put forward is that, local people does not like foreign visitors because they put a detrimental impact on their surroundings. In other words,they degade the environment by throwing rubbish. In particular, this trend is contiue to thrive on sacred places such as Haridwar and Rishikesh where the flock of tourists visits every year.For instance, plastic bottles, wrappers of snacks are spread all over on religious places. What is more, sometimes they hurt the sentiments of residents by wearing too skiny or shorts on public places.Naturally the people feel irritation from them.The nation India is a good illustration of this,because most of the individuals especially, old people are of conservative thinking.
These difficulties are solved by following the solutions which are mentioned below. Government played an essential role in transforming local people 's view point towards the international tourists.By and large, via introducing jobs of guides and by installing more local shops and hotels that are particularly made for the visitors to cater their needs.Furthermore,it helps in creating the warm relationship with tourists because by interacting,both are found easier to understand each other. However, local authorities had better, if providing dustbins on tourists visiting places. Ipso facto, billboards , sign boards are also a excellent way to aware the foreign visitors about their responsibilities.
It is conspicuous from the points stated above that ,although there are some flaws of international tourists yet if aforementioned measures are implemented then this will be firmly resolve.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, then, for instance, in particular, such as, by and large, in other words, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71328671329 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37708861399 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671328671329 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 100.615467112 49.4020404114 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.166666667 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155664616719 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501323440073 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338755256117 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894919676942 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461647338096 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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