Every country always has characteristic in the production of the resources. Many scientists believe that in term about different climate (tropic, sub-tropic, and Antarctic) many countries have special commodities. However, in recent decades, many countries is strong enough to self-supporting their own need, in which both parties have their reason whether this situation would bring to the advantage or deteriorate to its state.
To begin with, the superpower country can be achieved when the number of import has been stopped. Furthermore, if the country can manage itself, its Kurs value will increase among other countries Kurs. For example, starting in 2000th, Indonesia has stopped to import the rice product or any other essential stocks so that it will affect the robustness of rupiah Kurs. This is why many countries believe that governing the resources will increase welfare.
On the other hand, the self-supporting country will confess that the country is not only prosperous life but also that they do not demand to other country products. But there are several explanations that keeping-up the resource management by self without participating others will bring to the side effect. Firstly, we know that the most superpower country in the world is America and Rusia. Both of them can produce and supply their main products such as food, energy, and technology. These countries have been got a monopoly for the product in the world. They can manage the world economy because they have surplus resources. But, different from Venezuela, the most significant product is oil and gas but after the invention of shale fossil by America, this country has an impact which the price of oil and gas is dropped. Secondly, if there is no corporation in each country such as Bilateral or Multilateral, it will diminish the trust for each country and finished with a cold war.
In conclusion, self-supporting countries will contribute a comfort zone for them. But this position will be finished by the bad relationship between nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24770642202 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84313227538 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556574923547 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8102752107 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.941176471 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47058823529 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152722607907 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575549605413 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308334412273 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093102721479 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314504029871 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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